Friday, April 3, 2009

What I Learned - Body Paragraphs

The field was wet but perfect to do what we supposed to do. My position was forward together with my best friend. The game started I have to admit that I was nervous but I thought that I was there to do my best and to be dangerous against them. The time came right in the moment I had a ball open to kick it but I didn’t kick I shared the ball with my captain who was open too. I kicked right to his chest; he controlled it with his chest and kicked it right to the goal everyone shouted goallllllll! The goalkeeper couldn’t do anything the ball went to fast. This action led us to the big soccer party in Mexico.

Finally we were there ready to play our first game. My coach started the game with different players, they were good but not that good as my coach thought.

The other team immediately took the lead I knew that but I couldn’t say anything the coach decided to played with those guys and he was the boss. The first half is over we went to the take showers he spoke to us, come on guys we can make, we have 45 minutes left. He made a few substitutions. He sent me to the field but it was too late we couldn’t make it.

6 comments:

joey said...

soccer is a great sport for carlos and keep it going but you need to improve on focusing on soccer to show your team that can win.

joey said...

great on the paragraphs but add more comas.

daniel said...

you should of added the little paragragh in the middle with the last

Tim said...

good job on that nothin bad to say about that.

Marco Mira said...

this one is good friendship means a lot.

ali said...

its good to learn carlos im glad you recognise that