Friday, February 27, 2009

You Told Me

We started as friends you showed me you cared you told me you liked me
I told you I would always be their
You told me you loved me I showed you I didn’t care
You told me you missed me
I wouldn’t have know that you would still be there
I stuck by your side just how I once promised
you told me to give you my love and in return you’ll be honest

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

i really like this poem, i think you did a really good job, but at the end i felt i was kinda left hanging but i liked it great job!

Nick P (1)

Anonymous said...

I wish all relationships were 50/50. That if you showed you care, they would show they care too.




-shalee l.

Anonymous said...

i like your poem it is very cute but

Anonymous said...

i like it keep the good work

Anonymous said...

nice i like it ;)

Anonymous said...

oopse you did it again you played with my heart got lost in the game your not that inisoent

Anonymous said...

i live that poem.

Anonymous said...

i live that poem.

Anonymous said...

i like your poem you put good work into your poem!