Friday, April 3, 2009

Cinnamon Hills - Introduction

I was 13 when I went to my first program. It was called Y.H.A, it was located here Provo. I did well there for a while till I started school then I started to get in trouble. There were 16 girls including me (I lived in a group home) I was there for at least a year then I ran away from there twice. The second time is when they finally put me in D.T then they moved me to a program in St. George called Cinnamon Hills.

11 comments:

joey said...

Girl you need to stop runnig away but you need to improve on runing.

Alfredo said...

Were it says is located here Provo you haded to put here in Provo you did good but you should add more stuff.

Alfredo

villasenor said...

i think this is pretty good introduction and yo0u did well

joey said...

great words but add more comas

Tim said...

that sucks i was 14 programs suck but i guess all can do is keep your head up and keep moving forward dont give up

Alma Gutierrez said...

it sounds pretty intresting
but it seems too simple..

Anonymous said...

wow r u serious jk that sounds like it could of been fun in a way just don't run from this program your in now.

Landon

Anonymous said...

I like your intro. It was short enough so it didn't give away everything. But I want to know more.

Nick B.

Scott said...

i didnt know you went there you should make it longer

Anonymous said...

Great start but you should add a little more detail if possible. Its weird cuz I know where both those programs are.-Noble

Anonymous said...

I'm sorry that you went into a program so young in life. I was in a group home about a year and a half ago and I ran away from there twice too. I wasn't very successful at that though. Haha. Great job though.

-Rachel