Friday, April 3, 2009

D.T. - Introduction


My heart pumping with ears surrounded by sirens around the corner. I fill my stomach falling into sickness. I can fill that I’m in trouble. I’m just a kid living out in this world and walking the streets. Built with so much anger. After an argument after court with my mother.
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5 comments:

Alfredo said...

You explain it good but you should give more about what happened

ALFREDO

April 3, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Anonymous said...

Good Detail. first part didnt make sence.
/Jose

April 3, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Alma Gutierrez said...

it sounds really good but
i think you could at least mad it a little longer you kinda left us hanging in the end...

April 3, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Dani said...

You really explained this good. I had a few experiences in DT also. I hope that you can express your anger in a good way.
Dani

April 10, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Anonymous said...

Wow, intense. I always got that feeling when i heard those sirens go off.
You could have put more detail it it though. But you did an awesome job.

Kelsee 4th

April 10, 2009 at 12:22 PM

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