Friday, April 3, 2009

Let's Get Shot - Body Paragraphs

“I don’t see a parking meter.” I said to my homie tweak he said “what?”

“Quit parkin dogg pass that blunt! And get off my lawn.” And by this point he was laughing so hard that I had to get up out my seat and get it myself. As soon as I took my hit my phone rang. And I started trippin out because the phone was stolen and I had gotten calls from the guy that I stole it from in the firs place saying that they know who I am and that they were coming looking for me so I was trippin out about my family! It was stimppy askin if I had any thing I could let loose for samplers I told him “no dude but I do have some cheepys then he said “it’s for my O.G. and I said “okay meet my at Sharon.” “When?” “Ten minutes.” “Peace.” So I told tweak that I had to roll he got up and said “give me that blunt before you leave.” “Nope” I said “you’re coming with!”

So we got up and I grabbed the keys from his mom’s bed room and we got in the car and went to the school and walked down to Sharon park the showed up about ten minutes late but he had his o with him and he wanted to talk about buying some mass amounts and I could’ve afforded it but it was sketch cause I never met this guy and he’s askin for a pound of chronic so I asked him if he worked for Orem city and he asked if I was askin him for real I said yeah dogg I don’t know you and your askin for a pound of dank. To me that suspect. He pulled out a strap and then his little pee-wee homie stimppy pulled his heat to and tweak suddenly fell he went into shock and then the o.g. his name was spook he asked if I still thought that he was the pigs I said yeah I do so screw you he came closer and said open your mouth again and see what happens so me bein an idiot said awww he put his nine in my mouth and that’s when I realized he was for real just then he pistol whipped me knocked me out and robbed me.

7 comments:

Alma Gutierrez said...

ha-ha
thats crazy
its good at description

but you have a-lot of spelling
errors!

ali said...

ooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww wow... ummmmm thats an ...interesting story...im glad your still alive (even though i don't know who you are...but still) obviously since you wrote this. i think that the only thing that you need to do is check on your spelling and your good ... i like the set up of your story it is well organized

joey said...

that was the best storie I heard al day. but put more words that you choose it's good.

Scott said...

thats why you should stay out of gangs your story has good detail

Anonymous said...

Thats a really good story. Your a good writer and I would like to hear more.
Karissa

Anonymous said...

Oh wow. That is one crazy story. Your lucky that your still alive dude. But you have some spelling things you should check. But over all it was the best one i've heard so far.

Kelsee 4th.

Alfredo .S. Gtz said...

I guess but take a look at it again go thru it man you got hella errors


Alfredo .S. Gtz