The first time I mat martin is was like god sent her from haven it was like a dram bat I mat her from my homier manual it was his cozen we mat at the skate park she was go at skating batter then me at the time but wan I got to gat to no her I was riley in to her and I thin she now I did case we want to the park and it was cooled and I cap her worm and that is wan she fond out that I like her .there day after I act her out and she sad yes and it was the best day of my life case I that I wood never gat a chants with he case I that she was to good for me but I gas not she sad she like me to but her personality was grate that’s wet broth me on to her she was the one .she did a lot for me she got claws for me wan I did not have nanny it riley hit me wan she got me claws .she got me claws be for school so I did not look like I was home lice it was hard for me to gat money case we did not have that math money it was hard for my mom to gat a good paying job case we guts move to Brigham city it was hard case we were now in town.
Friday, April 3, 2009
Livin' Rough With the Girl of My Dreams - Body Paragraphs
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6 comments:
This was a tight story. Work on Spelling
thats hard but you did good on the paragraph but put some space's.
you have spelling errors but it's ok i like it
I can't really read this I think next time you need to go a little slower and work on spelling. I understand that you found the girl of your dreams and that really sweet. Good luck with everything!
-Kesha :)
I think this is a really nice paragraph. I would work on spelling and capitalization if I were you. Overall it was great.
thats tight bro, its good but work on your spelling.
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