Friday, April 3, 2009

Lovely Girl - Introduction / Body Paragraphs

One berry bright and exiting day I was in 3rd grade and I actually remember seeing this lovely fine like no other. So next day she came up to me and we started to kiss and we went date. We were supposedly in love which by that age I know nothing about.

The only reason I know that I don’t love her is because there was a short girl in my school she was sweet like candy. So this Shorty I loved I rather be with but now there’s no way to get with her probably I just wait to I get her in high school.

Now for real’s the only love that I thought I loved was Monika she was areal good one never made love to her pore life she left to Pomona or corona and she made me cry. In conclusion I still love her and like a burrito ill eat her up.

So another cute mama that I love was Julie Carrillo she live in west Wendover and she has a baby girl but I don’t care and I swear that I want to love her. Now that imp locked up she’s leaving to Mexico imp gone to miss her for the rest of my life. But I promised her that went I get out imp going to get a job and save up and bring her back from México and make life best with her.

One day I hit up the block in California I went with my cousin to watch the movie of the twin towers. Then all of a sudden Monica and I made my move and she said three words the most not accepted in my dictionary. She said no, stop, and don’t It was 7ven see her was like heaven and I thought that I was going to get a lily kiss. That same day I had some coronas and I was like not in the mood for a wining girl friend playing hard to get back then it was like a joy now she got in my nerves. In conclusion that day went I went home I slammed the door to her face.

3 comments:

joey said...

its good just add some more big words.

Anonymous said...

I really like your style of writing. Your really good at describing things. Keep it up!
Karissa

joey said...

having a great girl can inspire you to do great things in your life.