Friday, April 3, 2009

My First Love - Body Paragraphs

We were on the side of the school the air was so warm after the was over it was getting late and I had to go to tumbling as soon as I walked away I called my best friend Breanna Gabolden she didn’t answer the first time I called, so I texted her and told her too call me as she got my message.

As soon as I was out of the schools sight I ran all the way home I ran threw the front door threw my stuff on my bed then I ran into my moms room then told my sister Hondra all about it ha-ha my sister was excited for me I heard my phone ring I ran too it as fast as my legs could take me I answered it.

It was breanna I told her all about it she was happy for me too.

Later that day all I could think about was that kiss all that was on my mind seemed too be him I got butterflies every time I would think of the kiss.

That night I got this text message I checked who my phone to see who it was it was Tremaine “So I had an awesome day how was yours!” That’s what Tremaine said I was so excited to even open the text too even see his name on my phone I just wanted too scream shout.

After that day everything was no longer the same the next few weeks me and Tremaine became close with each other Tremaine would walk me too and from class it became a daily routine.

Tremaine and I would talk daily we would text late nights we would stay up for hours talking about absolutely nothing at all just simple tings we started dating October,19,2007 he was the one for me.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

That is so sweet. I loved it. It was so romantic and he sounds like a cool guy for walking you to your classes.






-Aubrianna (1)

Anonymous said...

That was really cute. It sounds like you had a lot of emotions going on at this time.
Karissa

joey said...

great job on keeping the storie going but you may need to put more detail.

daniel said...

that was great nina i felt the same when i met my true love.

villasenor said...

i like your blog you've nice introduction and yes everyone has a first love

Anonymous said...

That's really great Alma! I hope everything worked out with him. Sounds like the good times with a boy! Next time put a few more periods and commas so there aren't so many run on sentences.

-Kesha :)