Friday, April 3, 2009

When I Was 13 - Body Paragraphs

So yea when I moved out here I hated Utah. The reason I hated it So much is because I left everything behind. But then I started to meet people and then I started liking it because they started showing me the kicking spots. It wasn’t nothing like how I was used too because where I’m from we kick back at the sideshows we be rolling deep. Then when I went to kick back all they do is kick back in a parking lot and do nothing much. But then me and my bro bra started our own thing we started racing and all kind of stuff. Then 1 Night me and the homeboys were kicking back at a homie house we were like 30 fools just kicking it. And we ran out of alcohol so we hade to go get more while we were going some guy started throwing up signs at us. We were 4 in the car so we desisted to go back and jump the kid so we did and when we did we went to the store and bought the alcohol. Then we went back we got fade it then the next 3 days the homie went to my house and he told me that I was on the run and that police was coming to get me ride now. So I was like ok then I’ll wait for them ride here when I saw 10 police cars pulled up I trip out I was about to run when they all pulled their guns out and point them at me. I was still going to run but my brother was watching everything and I didn’t wanted to get shot in front of him so I said to myself no and gave myself to the cops, so that was my first time getting locked up here in Utah It was nothing like how I was used too because the Juveniles out there are way different it wasn’t hard their because all I really saw was little kids and the dudes so for one’s I felt save in juvenile .

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Your a good writer i want more i know how you feel.

TY

Dillon said...

i like it It was good

Jose S said...

ey thiS iS tight homie. work on Spelling

Alma Gutierrez said...

dang good job cuzo im realy impressed
with your writting skills :D
the only bad thing that was here is it was super scary...

Anonymous said...

i know that feeling im glad i know you.

TY

aubrey a said...

you have a few spelling errors like you felt safe in juvenile hall

scott said...

it sucks when you move and you have to make new firends

Marco Mira said...

hey this is pretty good just correct your spelling.

Anonymous said...

I think you could have put in some more description and you need to correct the spelling but other then that i liked it. Keep it up.

Nick P (1)