Wednesday, May 13, 2009

My Hero

A hero is a role model or someone you can look up to….

My mom is my hero I me the stuff she does for me is amazing and how supportive she has been through out my life is so awesome she stuck through thick and thin even at times when I didn’t want to I am so glad I have her in my life or else I would not know what to do

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Put more detail into it. For me this was way to short, what stuff does she do for you? give an example of something she has done for you. Keep writing!

Nick P (1)

Alfredo said...

Yo man thats what i call a hero i like it a lot you did a good job but you should off add a little bit in it but it's really good

Alfredo .S. Gtz

JOEY said...

THATS GREAT THAT YOU HAVE A HERO THATS COOL I HAVE ONE TOO.