Friday, February 27, 2009

One More Day With You

Is all I want to do is rest
I go to sleep at night
But my dreams I just can't fight

I think of you lying in that bed
And wonder if there is anything I could have said
I wish you were still here
But I know that you are still near

I love you more than you know
I just wish you didn't have to go
I just want one more day with you
And I know that’s what you would have wanted too

I miss you more and more each day
There is so much more we had to say
I know I will see you again

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

bad poen ese dose it relate to you in any way ese

Anonymous said...

i like this poem has a good message

Anonymous said...

Nothing is ever for certain. It goes along with the title, but I would like it to be longer. I wonder who this is who you're talking to or about.

Anthony

Anonymous said...

cool poem bro sounds and the title.

Anonymous said...

Wow bro I haven't really talked to you a ton but you seem like you have a really rough life. but still turned out a super good guy. keep your chin up.

Mark

Anonymous said...

all the poems i ve read are about love and i think that yours is very good because i can relate to that

Anonymous said...

i didnt know this foo could write

Anonymous said...

this is real deep i like this. .

Anonymous said...

........(i cant think) (but i like it)

Anonymous said...

this is great you really are good at writing poems

Anonymous said...

yo this hit home to me cuz, you know me and my ex got alot a isuse we still gota work out- frosty(a.k.a. andy)

Alfredo said...

i loved this poem myself too so yea

Alfredo .S. Gtz