…. A poem on techno
Exited….
……alive…..
….energetic….
Fun…..
Base….?
It doesn’t have to make since …..
You just have to feel it…..
….. its life…
….to me….
You never really know how the people who make the rules are thinking ……
… in not even shur I know what in thinking….
…… and you might not like it…..
……….. What else to do than live life…..
….dance to the music that you are given….
This makes no sense…..
….. hahahaha….
I guess this is why people don’t make poems while listening to techno…
….well at least the first part makes sense …..
Kind of….
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13 comments:
i hate technoe but i like some of theme but cool poem.
lol this poem makes me want dance. . .
I really liked it when you said "dance to the music that you're given". It can be a metaphor sort of thing. Music can be like your life and the dances that you do are the challenges that come. I really liked this poem. Great job!
~Rachel
The beauty of poetry is that it doesn't have to make sense. I think some of the most beautify poetry is in song, even techno.
Nick B.
I thought that it made sense. I thought that was a great poem. I totally agree because techno is good.
Tayler
Ha Ha thats funny but I think your right especially when you said "This makes no sense...hahahaha". I dont have any music that makes total sense.
-Aubrianna (1)
i think that your poem is tight i really like how you wrote it an you can tell that you really do like techno you put alot of power behind your peom.
i like your poem it's not depressing haha...
techno is the best almost
it was hard to ride but it was cheese i like cheese it was good
I love techno well some of it not all the songs
Alfredo
your right i like techno i get down nice poem first one taking about something diffrent i like it nina love it i like techno because i can be will be my self ;)
ay ma your prety good at writting i like how you write
Alfredo .S. Gtz
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