Being embarrassed isn't bad. It's good to feel your emotions exactly as they are. It's usually funny because you cared enough about something to feel that emotion. It's not bad though.
This is a good poem, but it's actually kind of sad in a way. cause you're talking about how you can't breathe, you don't know if someone is going to save you either. But great job.
13 comments:
Haha, nice! Thats a nice lil poem.
you did awesome
i hate to be embarrassed
i hate been embarrassed but hey just get over it
Alfredo
nice short lil poem it rhymes.
i hate being embarred!!
---alma gutierrez
Being embarrassed isn't bad. It's good to feel your emotions exactly as they are. It's usually funny because you cared enough about something to feel that emotion. It's not bad though.
Anthony
i hate to be laughed at but hey waht can you do just laugh no matter what when you fall just come up laughing even if it hurts chinup
Thats what I like about you, you got a good sense of humor.
i dont think you need to change anything it was great
This is a good poem, but it's actually kind of sad in a way. cause you're talking about how you can't breathe, you don't know if someone is going to save you either. But great job.
~Rachel
that happend to me once to but now i dont really care what people think
ja this is good add more to it for it could be betta
Alfredo .S. Gtz
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