Friday, March 27, 2009

Let's Get Shot - Introduction

You ever see your life flash before your eye like in the movies? No? Well it’s true when your life is really on the line no matter the situation whether you putting it down for the hood or whatever if your life is really on the line than you might know what I’m talking about.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked the main idea and i got hooked with a quickness. You could try to be more dicriptive

Anonymous said...

You were quick to the punch, but when I nearly died I didn't see my life before my eyes, only a black abyss...

Nick B.

joey said...

putting things in front of you is your first mistach it doesn't work but you need to work on putting family first and you would not be here.

joey said...

thats cool but get some more detail man.

Alfredo .S. Gtz said...

i see you to put your periods and all of does stuffs

Alfredo .S. Gtz