Friday, March 27, 2009
Almost Close to Death - Introduction
Were you close to death at one point? Well at the age of 15 I almost died because I at a party with my primos. Me and my cousins, we were all kickin’ it and we were all drinking and getting high. It was like around 12:00 a.m. by way it was summer when this happened.
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wow... this is powerful. Although it could use a little more detail. Sounds like a lot of things were going on that night...
Kelsee
i've allmost died alot of times so i kinda wanta here the rest of your storie.-frosty(aka andy)
yo i think your startin to tell a great storie but add a little detail-frosty(aka andy)
I Lkie How You Stated Wit A Question. You Could Describe it more
the story sounds interesting but you need a little more details
man that sounds crazy but add more detail so , i can read the rest man.
i think you need more details
thats crazy but add alot , alot of more detail.
it's really good just add more detail and don't say by the way it will be a lot better
i've been almost killed to when i was with my ex-jayson so i wanna hear more
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