Thats write everyday is not always ay good day Alfredo
good job i think its a tight poem -andy(a.k.a. frosty)
i liked the poem you can tell that you not having a very good day today but you put alot of emottion in it and it turned out good
oh how cute.
I think this is a good poem.I like it.Dani
there are a lot of poets in the world and not all poets have a good day and so you write about it.
It can be if you make it or at least have a good out look on the things you need to so you can be the best you can be.Mark
i think this poem will be a good poem and has meaning to it!
you are a hella cool person and dis is an ill ryme but you need to calm down- andy(a.k.a.frosty)
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Thats write everyday is not always ay good day
Alfredo
good job i think its a tight poem
-andy(a.k.a. frosty)
i liked the poem you can tell that you not having a very good day today but you put alot of emottion in it and it turned out good
oh how cute.
I think this is a good poem.I like it.
Dani
there are a lot of poets in the world and not all poets have a good day and so you write about it.
It can be if you make it or at least have a good out look on the things you need to so you can be the best you can be.
Mark
i think this poem will be a good poem and has meaning to it!
you are a hella cool person and dis is an ill ryme but you need to calm down- andy(a.k.a.frosty)
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