Friday, March 13, 2009

LoOsInG LoVe

Loosing a love one is a tragedy but it happens each and every day.
It’s a feeling of pain that won’t go away.
We ask god why me?
Am I not good enough?
Is there someone else?
Tear fall dripping down my face.
A shocking pain running through my body.
Then I open my eyes hoping it’s just a dream.
If so please wake me up.
I can’t take it anymore.
Fist closed palms sweaty then it hits me.
This is all real this is really happening right now.
You just want to give up and give your life.
Then you think to yourself is it worth it?
Is this the end?
Am I really thinking about hurting all those people for my choices?
Be strong I say to myself.
I can do it.
(Here I am stronger then ever. No one can stop me now but myself)

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

ya ese losing a love one is sad but you got to Put your head up and wipe your tears off your face ese this gose out to all the girls your beautiful dont let no one bring you downz ;)

Anonymous said...

Here I am stronger then ever. No one can stop me now but myself) ... i love this part in your poem its powerful in so many ways..

Anonymous said...

yo i know what its like dogg you ain't alone. much respect homie-frosty(a.k.a.Andy)

aubrey a said...

hey i know how that is nothing seems to take that pain away until coming stronger with yourself there's a lot of people that go through this day to day and i do have respect for you

Anonymous said...

I really liked this. You did a really good job on it. I can relate to it a lot, I know how you feel. Keep up the good work man.

Nick P (1)

daniel said...

i've lost losts of family members girls and i know really well hoe it feels i think every one dose you know keep it up i like this one ese

JOEY said...

LOSING LOVE IS HARD I BEEN THEIR DONE THAT IT SUCK DONKEY BUT i DON'T LET IT STAY WITH WITH ME THEIRS A LOT MORE FISH IN THE SEA.

ali said...

losing love sucks thats why theres so many mean people in this world