Friday, March 27, 2009

When I Moved Out - Introduction

“Jessica, are you ready,” said Laura, my sister.

“Yes I only got one box to put in the truck.” I think to myself, today is the day I well be on my own just me and my sister no parents to tell us what to do.

We finish putting are stuff away and organized our apartment by this time its 7p.m. The phone rings, “ring, ring, ring,” it’s a Saturday night, I answer, “hello”, on the other line is marisela, my aunt,

“Hey girl let go to the club tonight I’ll be there to pick you and Laura up in an hour”, Marisela says.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

i think you got a pretty good introduction

Alma Gutierrez said...

this is a good introduction jessica! keep it up

villasenor said...

your reintroduction is pretty good i understood

Anonymous said...

you did good but you could put alot more exciment into your blog-kirra

daniel said...

good poem but you could of finished it better but great ;)